TLC by Chrouya
Script: PhotoKano 10 on pad
Workraw: PhotoKano 10 workraw.mkv

717
But I remember many delicious things!
But I can still vividly remember that it was really delicious!
{this is what she was saying, albeit taken to a general level}

811
Stand up!{liberal -alta}
Look ahead of you!
{literal in the sense of that she shouldn't drop down now but stay positive}

887
When people weren't looking{there was nobody around}, I put them inside my desk.
While nobody was around, I put them inside your desk.
{dare mo inai: no one was around}
{it's his desk}

905
Kano isn't home yet?
Kanon isn't home yet?

934
If someone saw them, you'd be in trouble.{tlc, please -alta}{good enough, its like he'd be troubled / embarrassed}
There has got to be a troubling pervy book here somewhere.
{I liberalized this sentence because it's really hard to put "if someone saw them" in an adjective clause}

945
Senpai, I was invited into the association!{Association? -there's got to be better}
Senpai, I was invited into the community!{Association? -there's got to be better}
{maybe community?}

969
Leaving room to fail a lot without breaking our limits.{tlc, not sure it makes sense the way I understood it -alta}
{I think it's okay like this}

1002
Photograph the shinning goddess in the home economics room at dusk!
Photograph the shining goddess in the home economics room at dusk!

1004
Those boobs aren't hidden.{Don't hide those boob's >_>}
Those boobs aren't stealthy.{Don't hide those boob's >_>}
{keep her jargon in it}



==I start disliking this series more and more :< ==